Lou Ball
Waterloo, Iowa Fire Department
Proposal Title: Bicycle Helmet and Safety Education Program
Amount requested: $11,965.00
Comment by the instructor: This is a terrific example of
a community coalition getting things accomplished. Coalitions
are a growing trend in the grant field and I'm sure this was
helpful to you in obtaining your funding, Lou. Smart strategy.
Successfully Funded
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Chris Caulkins
Woodbury, Minnesota Public Safety Dept.
Proposal Title: 12-Lead Monitor/Defibrillators
Amount requested: $41,600
Comment by the instructor: Chris, the large percentage
of matching funds you are pledging will help persuade reviewers
you are committed to this project. I predict you'll get it
funded.
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Loren Charlston
Redmond, Washington Fire Department
Proposal Title: Multiple Casualty Incident Trailer
Amount requested: $8,023.50
Comment by instructor: This grant proposal was unsolicited
and does not follow the traditional format. The bottom line
is, Loren got it funded. Good work.
Successfully Funded
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Jill Craig
Austin, Texas Fire Department
Proposal Title: Safety Initative --A fitness/wellness program
for firefighters
Amount requested: $10,000.
Successfully Funded
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Wayne Glidden
La Luz, New Mexico Fire Department
Proposal Title: Quick Attack Equal Safety and Savings
Amount requested: $97,000
Comment by the instructor: Well-organized and succinct...just
what the funding sources look for in a proposal, Wayne. Good
luck.
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Tom Harnsberger
Carroll Fire Protection District in Urbana, Illinois
Proposal Title: Extrication Equipment
Amount requested: $13,263
Successfully Funded
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Dan Hernandez
Monterey County, California Fire Chief's Association
Proposal Title: Breaking the Fire Department's Language
Barrier
Amount requested: $48,500
Comment by the instructor: Excellent examples here of qualitative
materials that are truly persuasive. Your story of the ill-fated
Geberal Motors Nova campaign in Mexico is the perfect intro
to your objectives section.
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Michael Holdeman
Porter Township (Michigan) Emergency Services
Proposal Title: Enhancing Porter Township
Emergency Services
Amount requested: $11,453
Comment by the instructor: Good research, Michael.
Looking around your own community and state can unearth little
gems of opportunity, right? The harder you work, the luckier
you get!
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Mark Klaene
High Rolls, New Mexico Volunteer Fire Department
Proposal Title: Quick Attack Wildland/Urban Interface Vehicle
Amount requested: $70,000
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Thomas Maloney
Polson, Montana Fire Department
Proposal Title: Thermal Imaging Camera
Amount requested: $25,850
Comment by the instructor: Very effective supporting materials,
Thomas. I especially like your FAQ section.
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Geoff Maloon
Carmel Valley, California Fire Protection District
Proposal Title: Lowering the Devastating Costs of Firefighters
With Poor Health
--A Fitness/Wellness Program
Amount requested: $75,500
Comment by the instructor: I like your Dickens' quote in
the title subhead, Geoff. Nice touch. Also, your delayed lead
technique in the problem statement draws the reader into your
proposal very effectively.
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Shannon Marston
City of Nevada, Missouri Fire Department
Proposal Title: Preserving Life with a Thermal Imaging
Camera
Amount requested: $19,458
Comment by the instructor: It's great to see another fire
department seeking funds from a source other than FEMA. Your
proposal is well organized, Shannon, and your qualitative
supporting materials are very persuasive.
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Jay Neuman
Chester, California Fire Department
Sample Cover Letter
Amount requested: $200,000
Comment by the instructor: This is an example of a well-written
cover letter...succinct and sincere. I always recommend a
positive approach and in this letter the use of transitive
verbs (rather than the conditional would or could) gives it
added strength.
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Judy Pierce
Cape Coral, Florida Fire Department
Proposal Title: Emergency Operations Center Equipment
Amount requested: $158,147
Comment by the instructor: Good strategy, Judy...tying
your grant request into a larger city project. Your proposal
(representing only 9% of the city's total outlay for the EOC)
makes a very strong matching funds statement of credibility
and commitment to the project.
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Ann Pond
Laramie, Wyoming Fire Department
Proposal Title: Paramedics Save Lives
--A training program for paramedics
Amount requested: $417,762
Comment by the instructor: This is an ambitious project,
Ann. Your very thorough methodology section will show the
reviewers you have planned it carefully, and I believe you
have a good shot at getting it funded.
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Jeremy Rahn
Atwater, California Firefighters' Association
Proposal Title: Countdown to Survival
--A proposal for Automated External Defibrillators
Amount requested: $25,000
Comment by the instructor: Jeremy, this is one of the top
three proposals I've seen this year in terms of clarity, design
and overall concept. The Bank of America should come through
for you.
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Gerald Simon
Oakland, California Fire Department
Proposal Title: The Oakland Fire Safe Hills, Prevention
in Practice
Amount requested: $75,000
Comment by the instructor: A complex proposal that's easy
to read because it's so well organized. The objectives, methodology
and budget pages are especially well conceived and presented.
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Jeffrey Smith
Galveston, Texas Fire Department
Proposal Title: Saving Our Past From Fire --A proposal
for thermal imaging cameras
Amount requested: $57,250
Comment by the instructor: This is one of my favorite success
stories from our graduates...Great idea, Jeff!
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Hood River, Oregon Fire Department
Proposal Title: Protecting Historical Hood River
--A proposal for thermal imaging cameras
Amount requested: $103,450
Comment by the instructor: You are a creative guy, Devon.
This proposal is well conceived and clearly presented.
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